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Let's make your fantasy unputdownable!
Writing fantasy and want to create a well-structured and exciting plot?
Many fantasy writers spend years building their worlds, making sure every detail works. But what they often neglect—and what readers truly want—is tension. Readers want to be immersed in your book, unable to put it down. They want to stay up until 3 a.m. and forget everything else. Let's face it, when a reader puts down a book, they often never pick it up again.
If your beta reader never finishes your book, or if your published book isn't doing as well as it should despite your amazing worldbuilding and beautiful language, chances are it lacks tension.
Tension and plotting are my superpowers. I help writers create the unputdownable books they dream of.
I'm Ina Nes, your book coach, passionate about fantasy and crime.
Ready to Get Started?
Email me at inaingeborgnes@gmail.com to receive my Writer’s Intake Q&A, where you can tell me more about yourself and your story.
You’re also welcome to book a free 30-minute call to see if we’re a good fit.
I specialize in high fantasy, paranormal fantasy, gothic fiction, horror, mystery, thriller, and heist—either as standalone genres or in combination. I work with middle grade, young adult, and adult manuscripts.
I can also help you develop mystery or heist plots in other settings, including science fiction, historical fiction, alternate history, and dystopian or utopian worlds.
Why choose me as a book coach?
Author Accelerator Certified Book Coach
Author Accelerator provides the gold standard in book coach training. I’m a Certified Book Coach, which means I’m applying proven techniques to help you grow into the best writer you can be.
A Deep Love of the Craft
Want to use the right tools and techniques to elevate your story? Looking for someone who truly understands what you're talking about? I've got you covered.
I’m passionate about the craft of fiction. For over twenty years, I’ve devoured hundreds of books, blogs, podcasts, and videos on writing. When you’re stuck, I can provide the right tools and explain how to apply them to your story and your unique writing style. While my specialties are fantasy and crime (including mystery, thriller, and heist), I also have extensive knowledge in plotting, story structure, scene construction, exposition, dialogue, character arcs, romantic subplots, humor and comic relief, "show, don’t tell," symbolism, and much more.
Honest and Supportive
I’m committed to giving you honest feedback while also highlighting your strengths and progress. Learning and growing as a writer can be tough, which is why you need someone who's 100% on your side through both the highs and the lows. I strike a balance between tough love and emotional support to help you grow and thrive as a writer.
Writing with Heart and Intention
I believe every storyteller has something meaningful to say. I’ll ask the right questions to help you uncover your "why" and ensure your message comes through with clarity and purpose. Wanting to entertain and immerse your readers doesn’t conflict with writing a meaningful story. In fact, the best stories do both.
Helpful Suggestions
Many coaches and beta readers can point out what’s not working—but deep down, you probably already know. What you really need is someone who can help you fix those issues without compromising your vision. I’ll offer practical, specific suggestions to strengthen your story while staying true to your voice and intent.
"Ina has a deep understanding of narrative, its structure, and what goes into making a story not just readable, but memorable. It has been a rare pleasure to work with her while developing my own writing. She is thoughtful, smart, helpful, and most importantly, she has a grasp of story mechanics that I have never seen in anyone else."
“Ina Nes is without a doubt one of the Scandinavia’s most knowledgeable writing coaches and editors, with incredible range and constant curiosity. I recommend her to every writer I meet.”
— Lennart Guldbrandsson, emeritus editor at Element X"Working with Ina helped me get clearer on where my story begins and ends, and how those moments shape the emotional arc of the story. I’m heading into the next blueprint draft with a sharper sense of what matters and why."
— Karen Bacellar, writer and certified Author Accelerator Book Coach"Ina
is very informative, helpful, and kind."
My services
Develop Your Best Book Idea
Do you have a story idea but aren’t sure if it’s strong enough, or how to develop it further? Working with a coach at the idea stage, rather than waiting until the first draft, can save you hundreds of hours of detours and frustration. Together, we’ll uncover what’s working, identify what’s missing, and build a solid foundation for writing your best book.
We’ll use Blueprint for a Book, a powerful tool that clarifies all the big-picture decisions behind your story so we can strengthen them together. You’ll receive thoughtful comments, an editorial letter highlighting the most important opportunities for improvement, and two hour-long follow-up calls where we’ll explore practical next steps.
Investment: $1,500 / 15,000 NOK or SEK
Next-Level Manuscript
Ready to take your fantasy novel to the next draft with clarity, confidence, and excitement?
Send me your manuscript, and I’ll deliver an in-depth editorial letter that pinpoints the key areas for revision. Then, in two coaching sessions, one for the big picture and one for detailed discussion, we’ll turn those insights into actionable solutions.
To help you gain momentum as you revise, you’ll also receive one month of follow-up coaching at no extra cost.
Mystery and Heist Plotting
Working on a mystery or heist story and need a sounding board to make sure your plot holds up? These plot-heavy genres can feel overwhelming, but they don’t have to be. Through 1:1 coaching, we’ll walk through all the essential elements step by step and build a compelling, tightly woven story together.
Pricing available upon request.